Evaluation Question 4:-

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Evaluation Question 3:-

How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

Evaluation Question 2:-

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

During the process of creating our product, there were many stages where we decided to collect audience feedback. In collecting the feedback, we learnt a lot about our product and ways to develop and improve it.

When did you collect your feedback?

We collected feedback at various stages while creating our product. Our first set of feedback came from our pitch of initial ideas. From here we started to create our product and after showing our first cut gained another set of feedback. We then got to the stage where we decided to change our idea- in doing this; we pitched our new idea and the prospect of change, to our classmates in order to gain another set of feedback and opinions. After which, having gone with the concept of changing our product completely- we pitched our new idea to the group, again collecting more feedback. And finally, the majority of our feedback came from the completion of our final product. In doing this, and gaining constant feedback throughout the process of creating our product, it helped us to move onto the next step and improve what we had as we went along.

Ok, so what feedback did you get from pitching your original idea?

When first thinking of our product, we pitched our initial ideas to the class in order to gain some feedback to help us see whether people thought it would work or not. This helped us to gain an idea of whether we felt it would be successful or not. In pitching our idea, we grasped that our audience seemed to like the concept we were proposing. They thought that it fit the genre and the style of music we planned to use. It followed the stereotypes and conventions of both the artist and the genre well. Our audience also thought it was clear that we had gained a clear knowledge of the genre and artist through our research and planning which had benefitted us when starting to think of ideas. This helped us see that we had a clear understanding of the conventions of our chosen genre and of our artist’s conventions.

What did your classmates say regarding your first cut?

When we came to show our first cut to the rest of the group, our timeline seemed to be very empty. Only when showing the product, did we realise how little we actually had managed to complete. This helped us see that editing was going to take much longer than we thought. The ideas that we had put onto our timeline so far, had taken much longer to edit and finalise than we originally had planned and therefore compared to other groups in our class, we appeared to be behind. This helped us understand the amount of effort that went into the post production. The group thought there were some good ideas generally and that we were following on well from our pitch. The general feel of the product was starting to come together and take shape but there was obviously a lot of empty space. The pace of the product appeared quite slow and as a result lacked interest. Here I learnt that our video may not have been coming together as well as we imagined it would do. From this point, I started to have doubts about our work and wondered whether or not I was going to be happy with it.

What did you do from here?

From here, I began to look at how much we had done, how much we still had left to do and our time scale. I debated whether we had enough time to restart the product as a whole. In thinking this through, I realised that if we wanted to change the existing idea, we would have to refilm a lot of our footage anyway, meaning it would take just as long as restarting. In learning this, I felt we were as well restarting the whole product. I thought that a fresh idea would encourage us to work harder on our product. Thinking we had to restart the whole thing now in a smaller time scale would hopefully mean we would work much tighter as a group and more precisely in order to achieve our set deadlines.

So what audience feedback did you gain next and what did you learn from that?

In deciding to change the idea, we gathered the class together and talked of changing our idea. We pitched to them why we felt it wasn’t working as it was, what we needed to do to change the existing idea and then what we would do with a completely new idea. In doing so, we learnt our audience here were in mixed opinions as to what we should do, as of the time scale and the amount of work we were creating for ourselves in restarting. Until I said, I feel like the product has come to an end. It’s more of chore working on it than for it to be something we enjoy doing. At this point, our teacher immediately turned round and said start with a fresh idea then. And from there the majority of our classmates agreed. They taught us that perhaps a fresh idea would make the task seem more exciting and as a result change our attitude towards working on it for the better.

How did you then go about gaining your next set of feedback?

In deciding on changing our idea completely, we went through the same process as our first idea. Once we had come up with the initial ideas for this idea, we pitched our new ideas to the group; again learning that other opinions is important when creating something like this. We found the more different views you can get the better. Every person sees things differently and as a result has a different view or opinion on it. The group liked our idea- they said it followed the conventions of Coldplay’s music very well. They also said that, where we had decided to go against conventions of Coldplay’s stereotypes, it was obvious that we were trying to oppose them and would work well if done properly. It was also mentioned how we were following the conventions of our chosen genre well. In listening to our peers, we found out that the general outcome was that, the new idea sounded much more promising than the previous.

Was this the case? What was the outcome on your final product?

We had a lot of feedback for our final product, most of which is on our blogs. Generally the feedback was mostly positive, however we also asked for constructive feedback in order to see what we could improve on. As we asked such a large variety and amount of people for feedback it was interesting to see so many comments and such varied responses. From hearing all the positive things, we realised our product was very successful and worked well. It suited the genre and the artist well. But at the same time, we learnt that there were still things that could’ve been improved and changed.

Evaluation Question 1:-

In what ways do your ancillary product use, develop or challenge conventions of real media products?

Magazine Inspiration:-

Visual Brainstorm:-

After deciding on Clocks as our new song, we decided to create more of a visual brainstorm in order to gain more ideas and begin to put images in our heads.

Brainstorming Ideas:-

When originally deciding on our video and the ideas for the video footage; we, as a group, decided that our band were going to be Coldplay. From here we narrowed our song choices down to two. 

These were:
     -God Put A Smile Upon Your Face
     -Clocks

In order to come up with some sparks and first ideas, we played the songs and noted down anything that came to mind. Whether it be particular lyrics, actions, instruments, shots or images.

After doing this for both songs, we came together to collect all of our ideas and went from there on deciding the final song and first 'formal' idea.

Here is my planning.

As my planning was only done in pencil, some sections may be difficult to read. So here is what is written down.

God:

guitar
'down' - positive ending - doesn't sound it.
drums - foot tap?
'line'
'time' - your time - guilt
beat - montage
chorus - 'ahh' - spinning?
sun - smile - happy

song = release of anger/ emotion

smile

male

vulnerable, feels helpless?
stuck/ trapped - can see out, can't get out

32 beat intro - voice over?

'nobody knows' - (image of small building, with trees)
(image of bird) - grace? birds - freedom - links to being trapped.


Clocks:

drums - Euan 
piano - Claydon (Emma)

'lights go out' - BEV shot, B/O
'confusion' - montage
'tides' - sea, add sounds

clocks - time - running out, count down? - spinning, clock hands?
instrumental = montage
(clock image) - fades, overlays, visual ideas
'beg' - visual representation
time lapses (apple) - clock hands spinning - overlayed - different angles/speeds

LIGHTS 
CLOCKS

violins - Jay, Laura, Bianca - formal dress
fade into song + ticking sound = voice over